tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15451736.post6739707488476358638..comments2024-03-28T07:46:42.106-04:00Comments on Margaret Moore: What The Editor Saw: Revisions, Part 1Margaret Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11556769462995493735noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15451736.post-49819729979028755542007-06-20T10:57:00.000-04:002007-06-20T10:57:00.000-04:00That's an excellent point, something I'll have to ...That's an excellent point, something I'll have to keep my eyes open for.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12777733587200293442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15451736.post-907305401744560342007-06-20T09:15:00.000-04:002007-06-20T09:15:00.000-04:00Thanks, Maureen! And that's why it pays to listen...Thanks, Maureen! <BR/><BR/>And that's why it pays to listen to them. :-)Margaret Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11556769462995493735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15451736.post-20242697283103805362007-06-19T16:32:00.000-04:002007-06-19T16:32:00.000-04:00What a great show don't tell and characterization ...What a great show don't tell and characterization example. So often we see the characters so clearly in our minds we don't understand why readers don't too... But that's what critiquers and editors are for. :-)Maureen McGowanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00494408580378817045noreply@blogger.com